Most of the comments I got were good but some included things that I could change to make my work better. One of the things that was commented was that I could have filled up the empty spaces in my brochure which I think is true as it will advertise my product in detail. I could have also annotated my product to give the viewer a better understanding of the tank and i could have reduce my prices a bit to make them seem more realistic. My brochure could have been created with a better and more eye catching background and I could have varied the fonts so that the brochure could have turned out to be more attractive.
Some others have commented on me making my investigation post shorter because it is filled with a lot of information and the paragraphs have no spaces between them. I agree to this as it can get quite boring to the viewer as he or she goes on reading a advertising piece of work that has not many pictures that could help the viewer to clearly understand what is being advertised and any other extra information.
Some others have commented on me making my investigation post shorter because it is filled with a lot of information and the paragraphs have no spaces between them. I agree to this as it can get quite boring to the viewer as he or she goes on reading a advertising piece of work that has not many pictures that could help the viewer to clearly understand what is being advertised and any other extra information.
